CooL
That was good!! You must be proud of it!! Good work. :D
(I cannt hear the sound thats why I put a 0 on it... sorry XD)
Reviews for "DevilSlayer"
JazLyte responds:
Thankx, well I busted my butt to make it so I guess so! No worries about the sound thing, I'm VERY aware of it
Great
The only problems are that when the monsters got shot their heads blew off clean and not jagged and messed up like they should, and the voices sound like you were too close to the microphone. Great work otherwise.
JazLyte responds:
I know, I know, don't worry, the lazy things a goner, but thanx!
I'd give you a 4.5 if it went like that
This was a high quality animation. Your characters were very interesting and it seemed like they actually had lives and stories to tell. Your graphics, in my opinion, were the best part of the flash. The drawings were very nice and the anime theme went well with the story.
The only thing I didn't like about the fight scenes was how it didn't really show the actual contact or blocks- it seems like you were focusing on how powerful they were and not how they used it.
The sounds were a little off as well, like when one of your characters threw the sword at the female demon's face, it made a male grunt sound. You might want to expand your repitoir of sounds for future animations and coordinate them a little more.
Otherwise, this was a really nice animation.
JazLyte responds:
Yeah, I'm guilty on the fights. I was still really new to flash when I made it, and I still am. But I'm workin' hard on actually putting "action" into the action scenes. You had a good way of putting it. "it seems like you were focusing on how powerful they were and not how they used it." That really helps me to see where I went wrong at. Thanks for leaving a constructive review, it's refreshing, man. :)
good
You've go some really original ideas apart from the sound it was good
GOOD
at first i was gana savy not so good but the final fight was much better, i didnt like how a cut and a bullet looked the same like when thay first go in the church, i realy liked the names u made up, "Inmortal Face", but others like Jazz are ssooo over used