Make my heart soar!
I feel that this track is freaking wonderful, i'd love to hear some strings and perhaps some drums added into this in the long run but still this as a piano song in general is freaking amazing. I will be adding this to my fav's and fiving this. Great work buddy.
Keep it up!
Wyldfyre1
Hey there! Thanks so much for checking my piece, it means a lot! =D
Amazing
I'm amazed to how do u come up with this composition??
You do have an amazingly creative mind
The entire song was a masterpiece
oh, and by the way, I totally loved the ending (2:38-2:56)
Thanks so much my friend! I'm glad you liked it!
Fantastic!
This piece is amazing, it is a great background theme for surfing the web to. It's airy enough to be able to concentrate on the present tast, but it is solid enough to keep stray thoughts out.
Very well done.
That's so cool! thanks man for sharing that
Nicely done.
Reviewing as I go:
The subtle entrance of the strings at 0:13 is awesome. I almost wish the piano in this section was a little quieter, but then again the emotive power of it is quite effective.
At the 0:35 mark, the lower notes I think could use being a little quieter, just to emphasise the absence of the strings a little more.
I love the semi-absence of the strings in general. Insofar as even when they're playing, you can barely hear them; as if they're an echo themselves. Given this is meant to symbolise wind, it works very well.
1:06 is genius. The fluidity of the next minute also works well, especially given the subject matter.
The final chord could probably be fine without the strings added in. Simply because the echo on the strings at around 2:55-2:58 seems a little unnatural, Which is a shame, because the piece in general is very good. It's got a great air of melancholy. The piano sound is a little harsh at times, but apart from that I can't fault this. Looking forward to hearing the next two pieces from this, definitely.
Thanks so much for taking the time to review my piece, it means a lot to me, and i can't thank you enough. Loved reading your comment, and it helps a lot to improve, thanks again!
I made a mistake while I wrote the info about the piece, hehe, this is already the second piece, you can find the other one called "Dwelling at the Bottom of the Ocean" at my audio page, and I'll submit the third one tomorrow =) i'll let you know when it's uploaded, take care!