Excellent idea, mediocre execution
The main problem with this flash is the animation, or, I should say, lack thereof. Basically, it's a bunch of pictures with a narrator. That's tolerable...barely. However, you just couldn't content yourself with that, so you decided to make stupid, repetetive animations every once in a while. When the flash was in animation, I couldn't take it seriously, it just looked too horrible. I really like the story, but here's the thing: You made it really long, and when you make something long you have to find a way to keep the viewer's attention. Since, like I said before, this was a bunch of poorly animated pictures with a narrator, there was nothing to do that. It's pretty obvious that you put in a lot of stuff just for the sake of making it longer, too. This did give me an emotional reaction though, and I enjoyed it. I hope that next time you come up with something like this, you can back it up.