You show talent
While you do show great talent with this Flash, I'm not quite sure what the point of your cartoon is. I would make it longer, and include the basic components of a story. Shorts are fine, but you can't ignore the story just because you're making one.
But other than that, the graphics are great.
ok
dude no offense but that' took you a month it was like 2 seconds long it was a really good start tho and the reason i gave it a 3 is cause its really short oh and next time you should compress your audio size this could have probaly been less than 100 kb if you would have done that well next make it longer
too short
if you need to make a movie make it well lengthed, you can't expect for this movie to get a decent rating,