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Reviews for "Feioras Story Part 2"

that was ok i guess

It was good dont get me wrong but is think that you should make it a litle longer providing somemoree story to really get people involved. also the animation was good but next time try to be a bit more consistant. other than that keep up the good work.

merit44 responds:

I totally agree with you although don't think this wasn't effortless on my part because if everyone feels that way then they would be turning out way better Sugar Honey Ice Tea than myself ^^I do feel however it could be a lot better and I will aim for that for the both of us dude!

Nice

It was pretty good. The only thing i didn't like was the style always seemed to change...especially the backgrounds. Also the sound quality seemed quite poor to me in some places but it was an interesting style to say the least. I would have much preferred if you hadnt made this one of those "to be continued...."things. Anyway...i think it still deserves my5 as you can tell alot of time was consumed making this and it had my interest.

merit44 responds:

Thankyou! Yeah the sound requires a new mic and maybe some actors that are good so I don't have to stress over all the roles and leave me with more time to do the actual animation. Hum, I changed the bgs to be honest because I had many of them sitting in my folder from uncompleted projects that I started and never saw to frutation so I wanted to use some of them rather than let them rot away on my computer. Also I thought the same ones would get boring all the time. I will have to try to make the future flashes more consistent however so thank you again! I can actually benifit from this type of critisizm ^^

too hard to follow.

much of it I didnt catch. the voice acting didnt sound too good. (low sound score) the animation was ok, and yes, it was 3d, but seemed pretty easy to make, and the design look ed a little simple for most of the characters. (explaining the high graphics score) I didnt find if funny, and if you wanted there to be humor, I couldnt find any. (no humor score) I saw no fighting whatsoever, no blood, not even a light tap fight. (no violence score, I cant PLAY it, so I guess that explains the no interactivity score.) overall, i gave it a 5, because it didnt really catch my interest. but its better than any other random flash movie, which is why I guess its first page. I dont give 10s out for every three dimensional flash I see. I know it takes time, but that doesnt make up for plot or anything that keeps your attention for long. It was an ok movie I guess. I vote 3.

merit44 responds:

I agree on the voice acting part...unfortunately I'm still working on a method of fine tunning it and trying to obtain a better microphone since not everyone has a top of the line one at lying around ^^ This flash was meant to be funny at all so I'm glad you didn't laugh. The music should have been a clue. I don't understand what the big fasination is about blood and gore. If you want to see blood and gore that much then maybe you should inlist in the martail arts are something. I do apologize about the interactivity part. I will make sure my future works do include at least a preloader. I appreciate the 5 however and I truely do believe it was earned. I will try to make it easier to follow in the next ep with a little more info on the story.

I thought the backgrounds were rather nice

Not sure what's so bad about "traced bitmaps", but I thought the backgrounds were pretty decent. Very attractive and sleek. And the storyline wasn't bad, I'm definitely curious to see what happens next! :-)

merit44 responds:

Nothing at all is wrong with using bmps, jpegs, or tracing them as long as your not stealing someone elses work to do it. I guess its just a matter of preference for some people. The next one may not be until this summer which is still cool cause it gives me time to make it better and work on the movie as well ^^

Why....

This got a 3+ score i'll never know. Most of the backgrounds are traced bitmaps, or horribly cut jpeg's. The animation is choppy at best the story was horrible, the character design was horrible.

Sometimes Newgrounds worries me.

merit44 responds:

If I didn't get at least one person to bash the hell out of my work It just wouldn't be newgrounds -_- Traced bmps you say? Well yes, I did trace them from the originals which were also drawn by me! (Mainly to keep the file size smaller) I tell you what! Take a good look around the internet. I garentee you won't find any duplications unless stolen because they were either 3d generated by me or drawn by me. Hell I don't even need to defend myself against someone that probably can't draw a stick figure. It's not newgrounds we should be worried about it's people like you. Still no worries ^^ At least I got a 3 from you rather than a 0 so your only half an @$$ Anyway you can bash my work anytime. I always get a good laugh from losers like yourself. LOL!