Reviews for Feioras Story Part 2

[xxKillerKittyxx]

hmmm

okay, first of all, you need to learn how to accept criticism, either a little harsh or constructive.
on the flash, welll...it seemed like you kept changing the drawing style. One second, it would be a simple "Paint" sort of drawing...then suddenly they are running on uberly cool 3-D looking legs. The story-line leaves something to be desired...like a more detailed explanation...I have no idea what was going on. Okay...someone died...then three days ago two people were running up to a building where their husband/father was? I'm hoping the continuation explains the rest...

merit44 responds:

LoL! Dude I happen to be a graphic artist working for an agency on 23st in manhattan so I am quite capable of acdepting critiszm. My big thing is don't just say this freakin sucks without giving me some way to measure how to make it better. You would be pretty fusterated if you worked on something all day then some one just says "I hope you didn't draw that piece od Sugar Honey Ice Tea" cause what comes out of my @$$ looks better than that! Also if you hate a freakin idea do you really think I want to know that? I don't expect everyone to like what I do but damn don't just come straight out and make bias @$$ statments then expect me to just bite my tounge. I don't even take that Sugar Honey Ice Tea from my art director and She is a Boring Insubordanate Tense Hoe. I appreciate all the feed back I recieve positive or negitive just don't say stupud ignorant @$$ statements without any real substance or explanation to back it up is all I ask.Thankyou very much btw for shareing the positive and the negitives. I can actually grown from this review ^^

[Tombulgius]

Epics are fine...but don't ruin them like this.

I appreciate every attempt at an epic production on this site, but you didn't pull drama off well at all. Whatever the characters were --- cats, rats, what have you --- were dumb. Not only were they dumb-looking animals, they were also uber-anime'd up. I love anime, but the style can get annoying when amplified. (especially in the case of animal-people)

The voices were also bad. You used a squeaky little girl voice for some emo giant rat chick that nobody need care about. The story was okay....but man, if ever there was a bit of greatness in this story, the rat people, really killed it for me. The animation wasn't great, but that didn't bother me; the voices and character designs did.

merit44 responds:

Okay this is totally bias. Don't get me wrong I realize how NewGrounds works...content is placed on newgrounds, you really don't have any clue what to expect until after watching it so if it's not up to part then you get irritated, frigid, or what ever and I expect that. I'm the same way at times but this is some freakin nerve. The characters where choose to appear this way for a reason. This is my style and the style I choose to convey to my audience so that is not even up for discussion. If it's not your preference than I suggest from this point on you avoid my works Because this is for all of you out there on Newgrounds to know: I AM AN ANTRHO ANIME ARTIST! Nothing about my work is amplified its simply a matter of preference which this is obviously not yours. RAT CHICK, CAT, Bat, what ever the %^&* they may be come from a little something called imagination which I guess is seriously lacking around here. Oh, I'm sorry did that sound Bias? Maybe you know why I am pissed with this dumb @$$ comment. Under stand something just like you guys have the freedom to make your comments and remarks about my so called dumb works, I reserve the rights to make what ever I want. If the voices are bad to you fine. If the animation sucked what ever. Don't call my works dumb just cause you don't understand them. I can say the same thing about the people that comment on some of them for half the ignorant Sugar Honey Ice Tea that comes out of there mouths.

[RentACop]

Not good

Bad voice + bad animation + boring.

merit44 responds:

Well, glad I could bore you to death. At least you know now to stay clear of any future works I make so consider us even.

[Tanzinoid]

sometimes

sometimes its not a good idea to mix 3d and normal annimation charactors. if thiy're 3-d keep em 3-d... otherwise it doesnt look good but the story, voice actors, and sounds were good.

merit44 responds:

Yeah! I know your right! I did it to sort of short cut a bit to get this done faster since I have a lot of clas work to do and so I appologize for that. 2D is my prefered medium to begin with so I will try to stay a bit more consistent in the future all though I bet you can't point out ever scene I did in 3d besides the obvious ones I garentee it ^^Thanks for the positive as well the negitive feed back. This gives me room for improvment to generate a happier audience in the future.

[sky-lesson]

I give you credit

I've noticed a lot of the people reviewing saying that the voices and other audio was not-so-good, and i advise that you work on that too, but i do give you credit for doing all of the voices on your own, but you could've taken a little (mabye a longer) time to find some voice actors that were willing to work for/help you.

When you replied earlier about the backgrounds being inconsistant in style, you said that you didn't want the old files in your folder to rot, but if they were in there for a while being unused, they might've, should've stayed there, and again, you could've taken the time to create some brand new backgrounds.

It might be an improvement if you better paced the storytelling a bit. Try to slow it down.

Other than these things, i give you credit for the idea you have, i think that if you improve on all fronts, this could be a top 50 flash.

merit44 responds:

I give you more credit dude! Your not just another @$$ hole just trying to be cute or rack up some blam points. I admit that the style I used this time around was very inconsistent with my usual. 2d is my usual medium as you can see by checking out my site if you choose to.If you like to see some more of my works (not posted here) visit my site on deviant art : http://razorg456.deviantart.com/
I highly recommend you check out Feiora in love. It will give you a better idea of what I can do. I will try to make my next submission newgrounds worthy what ever that mean?