Please read this review.
When I first saw the flash, I knew it was going to be Harry Potter. When I saw the beginning, it was interesting. Then I realized that the protagonist's name was Usagi. Nothing against Asian people, I actually think they're awesome, but when Americans try to be Asian, because they saw it in an Anime, it's quite annoying to me.
Your animation was fine, but the fact that you put gay sex in there, yaoi, the main character acting gay, (going 'oh no no no!') and else, kind of ruined it for me.