Mixed Contect, with Average results
When I first ran the flash, the comicish graphics got my eye. They look neat, and would suit any kind of shooter / action based game, don't change that. However, when the main character "Bruce" first talked, I felt pain through my spine. The voice would probably suit a teenager hero going on a mission of throwing newspapers at people, but I don't think it quite fit the main character at all. You could ask for assistance in that issue from people you know, since there isn't too many lines with this much of content. The whole game, that I got to play wasn't too impressive. Enemies shooting too fast, no clear sighting where you're supposed to take a part in the shooting, didn't even notice them reloading. After all, I think you're doing pretty well, just try to avoid total chaos at some parts of the game, and you'll do fine. Too many flash animations are ruined due crappy sounds nowadays, try to do an exception on that.