Nice..
Nice graphics, very cinematic, although next time try and make the script a little more interesting (some people might get bored) but nice work, keep it up
Reviews for "Doll Ville -The Nice Guy"
reojionline responds:
Thank you man, I`ll think about that script thing
Good job...
The first part of this movie was very interesting...but with the giant robot and the "super saiyan"-like transformation you ruined the atmosphere!!!:D
reojionline responds:
Okay then its some kind of fantasy movie
.Maybe next time ill stick to the ground and thanks for the review
OK, here some questions/critic:
1) Why didn't the girl use the amulett like the "nice guy"? Respectively why did the amulett have not the same power? Why does it only acts like it acted to this "nice guy", risking the life of his old owner. Hmm.
2) Lots of scenes are drawn in profil perspective and the limbs moved too slowly and stiff sometimes. Especially in the fighting scenes...
3) Um, why did the clock go crazy, but nothing other? Car clocks are especially hard bulit, so if it's gone SO crazy, something had also happen to the guy (biological; magnetical fields or something) or the rest of the car (electronical, spark plugs go crazy too or something).
4) The blood was a little bit undetailed... more gradients or something like that.
5) Um... the explosions were every time the same, although the one who causes them, hurts on a other type of resistance (?). So IF there are explosions, they would be seen other. Or maybe when the guy hurts the robot more sparks and otherwise more dust from the ground... Anyway, why are there explosions (Or weren't they explosions?) when you hrut someone? I could only understand it, when the guy hit the robot with the mystical powers... but the other times...
But let's get out of those unimportant minor matters and back to the movie:
The beginning was quiet good, especial the writings were good bounded into the movie sequence. I really liked the atmosphere you put into with the moon... Maybe the guy should be more emotionial when he goes to the girl. Something like: "Oh my god! What happend to her? Everywhere... blood... she... oh my god!"
Anyway, i like the movie. Keep up the good work! :)
reojionline responds:
1. I was thinking like the girl can¡¦t use it because she not the chosen one (LOL)
Any way Ill reveal it if the movie continue to the second part(at least that what I was thinking, I really want to make a long movie like 20 minutes but if you read my note„³ I got bored)
Don¡¦t worry there will be a second part if many people like this.
2. Well that¡¦s me, there more room for improvements don¡¦t you thinks?
3. about the clock? Hm¡Kdefinitely something affecting it like the power of the amulet and the man him self so that¡¦s why. Revealing more will spoil the next episode.
4. The blood? Well there is so many example, actually I don¡¦t really like to create such scene but if you want it I¡¦ll try my best
5. Now the explosion? did you see SF vs. MK 2,Well I was trying to make something like that but the computer soon run very slowly so I reduce the animation and reused in some part and it¡¦s easy for to make a movie .
Whoa that was a lot of writing. Thanks for the review
Extremely Awkward
Well, it seemed like you had the right idea, but it was executed in a very odd fashion. What annoyed me the most was the voice of the protagonist. It was obviously some sort of program and it sounded very robotic and monotone. If you can't voice act, then don't. Please do not rely on speech programs unless you're making a clock/lock movie. The graphics were generally good. There were a few awkward movements and strange tweens, but still, they were decent overall. The dialogue was also very weird. "...with massive mass"? Come on man, word your sentences more appropriately or have someone proofread. The fight sequence was alright, but when the robot smashed the guy's spine, what, five or six times, how is he still alive? Unless he has some sort of super powers, metal crushing against vertebrae equals paralysis. However, despite all the oddities, I cannot give you any less than a 6. It's obvious that you spent a load of time on this flash, so I'll cut you some slack. Great effort, not a bad job.
3.45/5.00, B-, 81/100
reojionline responds:
Well Thanks there for the review, For it to come from some one who is really experience and got a lot of awards is truly appreciated ,So I’ve fixing some of the tween check it out, nothing major though so there you have it. I’m still searching for the voice it could be any time now. About the spine well the amulet heal it (you know amulet are suppose to protect some one from harm but I made a plus like make him berserk and powerfully)
it was good
liked the violence but here are some suggestions.
1. make it faster slow punches an the guy talked real slow that really bummed out the movie it was like-what.....the....hell? an don't....worry....i'm....a....nice....guy.
2. the explosions an punches were the same all thru the movie add some varity but prtty gd 3/5
reojionline responds:
Still searching for Elric voice and I’ve fixed the tweened and the explosion underway now.Thanks for the review