Great Work!
Excellent Flash Reoji!! As you said, you don't have brush tools, so that;s the only reaosn you didn't get ten for style. The music was amazingly done, but the voices were a little slow, and it continued to bother me. The Robot sounded great though. Lots of random violence, which is a plus, and his line about "I can't die... I'm the nice guy" cracked me up. Again, Great job, hope that you can get some better tools for your next flash, I'd love to see it!
Thank you very much,I was think of removing the voice but well tell me in the review?if someone out there want to voice this email me okay.Thanks for the review
good job.
i take it english isn't your first language. for your next movie, you should get someone to do the voices, and maybe someone to check your script to make your sentences sound more natural. i highly suggest doing this.
you're drawing is great. i don't see anything wrong with it. the only problem is the script and voices. if you do this with your next movie, and the visuals are even close to this movie's, i'm sure it'll get atleast a 3.8/5. you have incredible talent and promise, all you have to do now is fix the voices and sentences. that's all.
Okay then ill try fixing it, Correct! English is not my first language and you know what! I have been thinking too, finding people to do the scripting work and voice acting but when I think again who will want to do that with my movie?hm...it still kept me thinking any way thanks for the reviews and to all the reviewer of Doll Ville The nice guy
pretty good...
but it would be better if you used real voices.
Well,Thats the problem my mic broken and i cant find any body?I think too it would give more emotion.Thanks
Can turn to be an intresting plot
The plot seems intresting, but some parts were pretty fucked, and sounded quite strange. Not sure if you really were supposed to laugh. The motion tweening weren't smooth, so I would suggest you to practice more on it, or plainly use FBF. I promise that it will look much better to these kind of flash movies. I enjoyed the movie, but there could be some improvements. Great work, and keep it up.
Thank you, I agree with you, there will always room for improvements. The FBF thing is difficult when I use mouse to draw each frame, I was trying like every movement for 1 frame? Than the result was funny (it actually makes me laugh).
Pretty good!
Some sounds was good and somes not. But overall that was a good movie. Different than others. Well you can up to frame rate on Flash.
But keep going dude!
-HeNe
Hey Thanks Dude for the nice review,hm... I will keep doing it but first I need to find a life... NG is eating me alive(LOL) and Idea....