OK
Huzzah for stealing the mouths from the Super Flash Bros. Lip-Syncing tutorial!
The whole thing goes on too damn long. I get the fact that you're trying to make a sitcom-like episode of a series, but when most of the jokes fall flat it gets a bit tedious. Shorten the opening sequence and when you add pause buttons and the like, make sure your audio isn't in a movie clip.
I give you a 6 for effort though.
Interesting enough, reminds me of...
Personally, I love this kind of humor. Especially where phrases are used, and yet twisted to the writer's own ingenuity. For example, "Trying to open up my locker". Love that stuff.
However, this reminds me a great deal of Family Guy. I realized that in the previous episodes, this technique was not used. Did the creator, somehow, use this show as inspiration? Just a curious thought.
Another thought goes toward the absence of Justin. He was probably one of most unique members of the group, and he just seems to have offed and left. You guys get into a fight or something? And then when I watched this episode, it seemed Craig tried to fill in Justin's shoes and left his old character behind. I just say plan a definite characterization, and go with it.
Other than that, I have to say, awesome job. Love how through each episode, the work has evolved and shows your growth in experience. Keep up the good work guys, can't wait for more.
-Psyches
Nope! No fights... I'm suprised someone took the time to see differences between this and the old ones (Didn't know people watched the old ones!)
It just changed as our table in real life changed, we didn't want to base it off of something 3 years earlier.
You're right, we need to develop characters and role with them, and I plan on doing this between this episode and the next...
Thanks a lot for the review.
Great!
I feel compelled to tell you that I highly enjoyed this humorous cartoon. No seriously though, I laughed on multiple occasions, and when that happens, it can only mean one thing, and I'll figure out what that is later. I'm looking forward to future episodes, you did a really great job on this one.
that was not funny.....
that bored me to death.........
Sorry...
I'm sorry, but I'm not reviewing the animation here, although it was pretty damn funny. I'm just pissed off at the guy who reviewed before me, who's all like "Oh dear, this is RACIST!"
I hate racism above everything else, but my second most hated thing is when people are overly PC. That wasn't racist, or at least not from what I could tell. What does offend me is that YOU are quite blatantly racist, if in a different way.
You WANT them to insult the asian guy? What the fuck is wrong with you? So it's ok to insult other ethnicities as long as they're not black? That is pretty fucking hypocritical. Oh yes, the blacks have suffered enough, but Asians haven't so let's have a dig at them instead! Great attitude!
Now, I'll be honest, I'm white and I don't have a great number of black friends. There just aren't a great number of them in my area. However, I get the feeling that some of them might be pissed off when you look down on them and start pitying them and act all nice just because they're black. It's still racism, just in reverse, and if it doesn't piss them off, it certainly pisses me off.
Also, the fact that they're white means they just have to be racist, right? Sorry to use the phrase you described yourself as, a white male. Because all white males bar you are racist. If they'd been black taking the piss out of white people it would be perfectly ok, but just the idea of white people taking the piss out of black gets you riled up. You god damn hypocritical racist bastard!
Anyway, I'm off to calm down while I do some more obviously racist things, since I'm a white male and thus must obviously be racist like the creators of this animation, since I'm sticking up for them.
People like the guy who did that review make me sick.