Very well written
It's nice to see someone who actually takes the time not only to have a well organized plot in a cartoon, but also writes well enough that keep the attention the entire time.
I think the dialog from this would be entertaining even without the animation, you did a great job.
Thanks a lot for this comment- it means a lot.
My friends and I love to write, and we make it a point to take time before the cartoon to write out a good script, and I'm glad you think I acheived that! =]
really good
awsome! very well done, it was a bit lengthy, but thats all good, cause most here complain that flash is to short. lol
anyway, id love to follow more episodes please make more ;)
its actually pretty cool
This has great humor but its kinda long for a flash. Its definately great though.
Great
I really liked this, and I went back and watched the other episodes too. You improved a whole lot between each episode, and this one is just awesome. I like your sense of humor. Keep it up
LOL!
you got nice backgrounds there man keep up the good work. =D