good
it was good but wat was the song at the beginning of the flash
Reviews for "Halo: the Revenge: Part 1"
ninja24 responds:
it said in the credits... V_V...it was "blow me away" by breaking benjamin
I liked it
I think you have real potention as a flash artist. I gave interactivty a nine because of the "skip to the fighting" button:P
ok
it was pretty good but it could have been better
I dunno...
First of all, the opening dialogue needs some serious touch-ups. The Master Chief is telling Cortana "I will keep it on auto-pilot until you are ready to return." What's going on here? Isn't Cortana the autopilot? If she left with the Master Chief, why is she talking to him over the radio? I don't get it.
Also -- I'm not a severe Halo-phile, so correct me if I'm wrong -- but I'm pretty sure that the Chief can't do an atmosphere entry without a ship or a shuttle.
Also, while the fighting was animated rather well, there were some times when I thought it seemed a touch out of character. Dodging bullets? Backflipping? I'm sorry, but it seems to me like he'd blast his way through enemies without all of those fancy-shmancy stunts. After all, the Chief is more Rambo than Neo.
Aside from that, run the dialogue through a spell checker, tone down the music just a touch, and try just a little more logic. After all, even a parody has to have a grain of sense.
ninja24 responds:
allow me to clear some things up.....
for the most part, it i snot meant to be painstakingly accurate. I used the dropship scene because I wanted to. I knew the pelican cant go into space, but i thought it would be cool. :P.
and thanks for addressing the dialouge, what I was trying to show was that cortana was in the ship, and the was communicating to the chief via radio from the ship.
about the neo part...lol i honestly didn't care...i wanted to animate backflips and stuff so thats waht i did...thanks for the review.
you posted this already
you should really keep track of your flash animations. I saw this before, and you have another one in your file with the same name! seriously... you probably got my real evaluation on the other one
ninja24 responds:
I KNOW! This is a resubmission, with pretty backgrounds and stuff.