OK
It was cool, the fight scene rocked, reminded me of Equilirium and Transporter. You should make one reallly long fights scene.
Reviews for "Halo: the Revenge: Part 1"
Constructive critisim
drop the spritey pixelated charecter's, i'm assuming you lifted them of megaman or something old, you can tell you used the sprites for frame by frame animation which is awsome because frame by frame animation always yealds much better results than tweens and is also much more time consuming and difficult
anyway i lost track, just convert all your sprites over to vector, also you could convert all the other images you choose to use (like the covenant hover bike thing) into vector as well. Then your guns won't look out of place on your char's, neither will anything else you choose to add. Basic shading also works really well, check out any profesional flash and you see some really simple, yet beautiful and effective shading on the edges of dark colour patches on vector graphics. Check out xombie or littlefoot for example.
Anyway dude i know i said a lot but your submission is awsome i forgot how much i loved ng's and i can't wait to fix my buggy flash so i can have a shot at adding sumissions again
ninja24 responds:
yay! :D... well yeah constuctive crit is allways appresiated. I HAVE seen littlefoot and xombie, and i do admit they look fantastic. I hope to one day acheive something of that calibur, but right now, im not quite that good. I may include shading on my next one...
You give sprites a better name! :D
I liked it. Although, it would be great if voices could be used... Also, the fight scene seemed to be lacking... Anyways, great flash, i enjoyed it, hope to see some new ones once inproved more :D
ninja24 responds:
the reason I didn't include voices is that...well you reeeeeally dont want to hear me immitate master chief, and none of my friends sound like him either sooooo yeah.
pretty good graprhics chould be better.
if you make a part two tune up the graphics a lil bit and make part two a lilbit longer and give more too the storie.but other then that keep up the good work.
-sagnasty
Decent Flash
This flash is decent but....
It's missing something....
Like a plot?
If you could of made it longer and with an actual story so that us NG members could understand why MC dropped from the pelican and killed dozens of soldiers.. Oh well... I like Halo alot and the sprites were O.K i guess. This gets a 3/5