i like it
i listened to it like you asked and i liked it its real good but the part at about 2 min 14 sec in my opinion which doesnt really matter i think you make the part go on just a bit to long and it makes me think of a skipping record i'd skim that part down by about 1 to 2 sec but thats just me. i also like how you changed the beat up and its not just the same thing over and over i also like it how you add different background beats. overall a nice melody and i think you should make one similar