Shiny
I really liked the audio that was provided and you did give credits for its source, so +1 cookie point.
The preloader page was a little cramped with text, but beyond that, the game has a professional feel to it, not that it looked pro, but I could feel that the author was really trying hard to improve every bit of the game, and it added another cookie point on my list for efforts. +2
Then the option for idiot proof tutorial, is really appreciated as well.
Overall feel to the game is relaxed, +2.
The fact that there was even a V/O (voiceover) with subtitles, so more points to the list, because it wasn't just plain reading, but it also attempts different emotion and feel, with some slangs, haha! +2
On to the game play and navigation, it was a little tedious to move close to things first everytime before being able to do anything (I admit I'm lazy).. (-1) but the game was detailed. Anybody ever mention the koi looking fish in the tank at the start? (+1) I really liked that one. I was also impressed when I used the map, the guy really took it out of his pockets (+1), whereas I would imagine other games just tossing out a picture they call a map.
The 8 points are now justified. :)