Good for a first flash
When people say that you shouldnt post your first flash, they mean if it sucks with a crap stick person and dirt poor animation. Yours for a first flash is great, although the humor wasnt too great. It was still really good for a first flash, or anything on the portal in general.
Was actually very good for a first submission and you know it! :p nice job on this. Graphics and animation were very well done considering this is your first submission. The sound was a little sketchy (distorted) but apart from that it was a funny and was a nice place to start at on becoming teh leetest of all Flash Masters! *AHEM*... Keep up teh worxxorz! :D
DNT POST UR FALSH!11!
nah that was quite cool. i was actually thinking about the summon/gf thing :(
graphics were good. you have a lot of talent
n00b
Ha ha, Cloud's a total n00b. The animation was okay, and for a first flash that was pretty good. It wasn't incredibly witty or anything, but I have a big ol' soft spot for FF humor. Keep it up.
Not bad for a first time.
Believe me, this is a whole lot better than all of the other first flashes that last, like, three seconds. Graphics and art style, all good. Only huge problem I had was the voice. A bit awkward at times. But aside from that, a decent flash.