Getting there
I've seen alot of flash tagged as 'my first' and was expecting crap... but this isn't. Keep practicing, I think you have alot of potential.
Getting there
I've seen alot of flash tagged as 'my first' and was expecting crap... but this isn't. Keep practicing, I think you have alot of potential.
Meh
What just happened?! it all went by sort of fast. I really didnt catch the story, looks almost like your having a bit of timing issues with each scene. The animation was smooth and well done, but it was like BAM BAM BAM DONE and i was left wondering where i was. It has potential, your ability to move characters smoothly through flash is to be envyed.
Not bad
The animation was a little over-simplified but the story line in the prologue (I guess) sounded very promising. If you expand on that, you could really come up with something good.
ok but......
that took way to long to load up for a 15 second flash try to compress the files or sumthin to lower the loading files, other then that it was pretty good for a first flash, keep up the work
:D thanks!
nice
for a first flash i must say this is quality work, compared to the people who say "this is my first flash" and put something god awful this is refreshing, the attempt at a story didint really go anywhere but for your first its top notch work my friend, keep it up
thanks alot.:D