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Reviews for "LR: Prelude"

pretty good.

Pretty good, sept one thing. The sword, she grabs it upside down and it didnt fall out. Swords of that style don't have a tight scabbard and are verry loose, to improve speed of removing the sword or flinging the scabbard with the sword inside so the sword shoots out at a verry fast rate, it hurts bad i did it to my friend and he almost passed out. My comment about the sword was just a suggestion to make it more like a Samurai style sword fighter. I hope you find that helpful.

Zombie-Pimp responds:

Hmm you make a good point, I'll take this suggestion into consideration for future fight scenes with this character. Thanks!

Hella Good Time

This was a pretty rockin little flick. Limiter Removal like the YuGiOh card?? Shit, that alone earns you credit.

It was good...

...but the sound kind of kicked out when the music started. The thug's voice was kind of muted at first.

The colors were good, the animation was smooth, but the art, at some points, the figures were lacking proportion, and looked a bit odd, but other than that, it was good.

I hope you get to make more. I look forward to it.

mmmmm

A rip of a crappy anime with a big boobed chick and no brains.. think the ep was "An Angry Hakufu and a School Wide Counterattack"

Well other than the copying, in which 90% of people won't notice, it delivers entertainment. The plot is was lame as the anime plot was, so no change. I liked the voice acting, I feel that was the strongest part. You have good talent in animating, make something else though

hmm

Well.. interesting concept.. but can use a lot of work.

First of all, maybe some hints on where she is actually going?
The map thing didn't really gave any clues more than she is really dumb. Wich comes to the second part, the character herself seems.. well the combined excessive skill in martial arts as well as beeing extremly dumb.. doesn't really mix up.. skill doesn't come without knowledge and studying.. even Naruto showed signs of intelect and he is plain stupid. Work some more on the character.

The sound was alright but lacked some base, but thats flash in it's prime so can't really give you any personal grades for that.
Other than that the music was too loud when the characters made conversation, you should tune it down a notch.

Other than that, keep up the work and I hope to see more of this.