cool but...
havent we already seen somthing like this b4?
Reviews for "LR: Prelude"
UNoriginal
Okay, it's basically copying Kill Bill scenes, but in some random lifeless area. Here's the thing though, some guy isn't going to punch the hell out of someone like that. They might have a pocket knife, bat, or some other blunt object. Then the WHOLE gang would beat the shit out of her.
My 2 cents
Your prelude was entertaining, but it really didnt grab my attention.
It might be that i'm just burned out on the whole "Kill Bill" Style. Also for a prelude, it really didnt put down the most important prerequisite for a new aspiring series on NG. IE: laying out the Story & Character Introduction.
I would also ask, that you show some signs of bruising/Scaring to Sable when she takes punishment from enemies. Without putting that on her, it made her "God-like" which lessens my interest to some degree. Also the sound should be toned down a little more. Its okay to have Back ground music, but it shouldnt be louder then the character's voices.
I hope I didnt sound like a jerk. I hope that my comment will help you some what. Keep up the good work, and I look forward to viewing the first part of this new "series"
Um
It seems pretty much like nerd porn to tell ya the truth, but the4 ending song sounds like its rapped by Mc Doom from danger doom. Sounds like him at least, and it his style and the beats sounds like danger mouse made em. But pretty much it just looks like 2 hornty dude got together and said, hey lets make a flash anime about some hot slutty chic who has a sword.
Nice
This looks like it will be a good series