Yikes.
You can put your skills to better use. The way you did the fight scnenes was spectacular. However, ninja-bitch just doesn't have much appeal. To anyone with something on their mind besides boobs, anyway.
Reviews for "LR: Prelude"
cliche cliche cliche...
Graphics: Although this was drawn decent, the animation was either choppy, or the movements were poorly setup. Not too mention that the facial features lacked expression.
Style: Take every anime cliche in the book and create a Flash using such. The only thing missing are beams, which in this case may have made things looks less boring. Another thing, the dialogue was just as full of cliches.
Sound: The four is only for the actress. The other voice actors need to learn how to act. As for you, learn to use voices and sound, as well as use music that won't overpower the sound.
Violence: Although the fight scene had elements I normally consider awesome, you royally butchered it. It was boring, started in the stupidest way possible, and was just a poor attempt to imitate anime.
Overall: This was one big cliche. Idiot woman gets lost, attacked, and the attackers get nailed by a traveling swordsman, which is the woman that got lost. Next time, make the character more like the bride from Kill Bill and less like Krillens girlfriend in DBZs filler 'Garlic Saga', Cause lets face it, this was not original.
Damn! that was sweet
That was some messed up shit. She like kiked some ass from no where. With a little more practice, the images could look better- but not too much. But, dude, awesome story- kinda. Awesome video anyway. Make one like this but longer.
mmmmm
A rip of a crappy anime with a big boobed chick and no brains.. think the ep was "An Angry Hakufu and a School Wide Counterattack"
Well other than the copying, in which 90% of people won't notice, it delivers entertainment. The plot is was lame as the anime plot was, so no change. I liked the voice acting, I feel that was the strongest part. You have good talent in animating, make something else though
If you're going to rip off an anime...
... Make sure it's not a popular one. The concept, the scenario, even the name "Limiter Removal" is a direct rip of Ikki Tousen, a.k.a. Battle Vixens. Ironic how your main character so well parallels the protagonist of Ikki Tousen, even to this "Limiter Removal" which in the anime is her embracing her inner demon. This scenario is also a direct rip from episode 5 or 6, post high school bout. If you want to claim that this is all "coincidence", I'd love to see a copyright pre release of Tousen, or better yet Battle Vixens (The manga version). I award you no points, and may God have mercy on your soul.
P.S. Blams for unoriginality. But I do admit, the art work was nice, as was the sound.