Things to work on.
I enjoyed the style you used but I was perturbed by somethings in the movie. First off was the use of background music. Background music should be just that, in the background. Key rules of thumb would be to lower the volume on the music and choose music with no lyrics when voicing dialogue. Also the character development was lacking. First she was a ditz who could remember where she was then she is a highly proficient killer. Elaborate. I think this series has great potential, keep up the motivation and good work.