Overall great animation.
That was very intresting, it was a really good animation, the only real problem with it, is maybe you should make it slightly longer. I think then it be a 10 scorer all the way.
Reviews for "With A Smile"
Amazeing graphics & Pervious Style
Overall great animation, now if you would follow threw with a nice serious or a sequil i'd be great. I'd qualify this as more of a teaser then anything else. But i see the big problems with high high high graph movies like this is choppyness i prefer smoothness over choppyness so if you do movie with graphics like this make sure the frames are close and the movements are smooth.
Alamus responds:
Yeah, I know its pretty choppy. I didn't really get enough time to put in all my tweens like I should have. I had a deadline in the class I made this for and well, I handed in what I got finished.
I'm gonna make up for that in a new animation I'm doing for my last 2-D class. And in this one it will play out as a trailer for my series with cool fight scene and more pretty things... weeeee.
right!
mad skills, man. doesn't look like you have anything to worry about at NG.
that was amazing!
i loved your flash. the graphics are so beautifu and so detailed! the animation was very very good. i would recomend a play button at the begining but thats it. the music is beautiful!!! you have exceptional skills! please, submit more to newgrounds, we are always happy to se something this good!!! congratulations!
Alamus responds:
.... I don't know how to make a play button! ::runs away and cries::
Very good.
I enjoyed this alot. Its always refreshing to see something that some one put some effort into. Give us more.