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Nice work man...
Reviews for "Urban Mafia Pt.1"
Looks kinda good
Well givin the fact it is an intro to a series it is not bad at all. Music was good but the voice which I can imagine is yours needs to be inline to what you are writing. Cause at one point you didnt say anything. Then another point you just rushed yourself in trying to finish up what you wrote with your voice which got to blurried. But all in all it looks good. When do you think you will submit your new one will like to see what you came up with. GOOD LUCK
not that bad for a part 1
I give u a 7 because the animation itself was done pretty good, but your voice acting was actually quite awful. So in the future either take time and do the voice acting correctly or have someone else who can speak alittle clearer and much lower. I say lower cuz this was a intro so you would expect a low voice, almost kind of a whisper, that recaps what lead up to the girl seeking revenge.
Anyways overall it wasn't that bad, what you could do is try to revise this version.
Good start
I wouldn't call this complete, but I like the direction. I can see you coming back to this someday and making it longer, adding dialogue, really fleshing everything out. It has the framework of a potentially great movie!
Hey, not bad.
The positives: you can certainly draw. You took time on it, and I respect that.
The negatives: The story seemed like a recap put in the beginning of a book's sequel, and the subtitles were not exactly what you said. Plus, it's short.
In general, I think you've got budding talent, so fill up that room you have for improvement! I think you could've become an animator and enjoyed twice the success you have now as an artist.