Hmmm. Interesting.
The graphics were very good. I was a bit disappointed that no action took place, but i am interested to see the next one, (if that ever happens) and to see if she does anything. Lol. The music was SO annoying though, and so was the voice. It mumbled too much.
Overall, it was ok, it left me wanting to see the next one. And that's good.
Good but..
If you know your voice isn't made for a certain part like a narrator, don't do it. Get someone else to do it. And action-like music was definately not the kind for this scene.
well...
It's all right. Not much too it. Had a lot of room for graphic development, i saw potential in there with that dirt flying around. Obviously you dont have a coherent story, and left a lot of room for yourslef to expand, which is good, the only thing is if you're not going to reveal elements of the story in your intro trailer, put some action in. Good luck to you, I'll be looking for this.
Ok a few things
Ok, well I know you are famous ans such, but this needs ALOT of work. Im almost sure this was done frame by frame, which is fine IF you have great graphics, which these need a bit of work. They arent bad, but they lack depth, and flare. The audio was good, but needs to be a bit louder. Also the plot seems kinda unfinished.
Good luck, and keep it up.
2/5
dude stick to rapping
i could barley under stand what u where saying and i had no clue wat u it was about
ps gave 5 because i like ur music