It was funny.
I liked the jokes, and the art was pretty cool, but here's my grief.
You just used a clip from a comedian. I mean, you didn't really write anything. You just had a character stand there as if he were the comedian, and a couple things float on screen to enhance a joke.
Now, if you are just going to go off on me about how I have no submissions, save your time. I know I have none, and that won't prove how great you are, or how much better you are than me. I give you props for submitting a funny animation. All I am saying, is I want to see you make something of your own. Your own jokes, or story.
Ps. Who was that comedian?