ooh mr lokken.
fine cartoon you have there. as usual of course. could have used some blood when his skull gets crushed, but it's all good :p smooth graphics, and a good short story line. another story well told, good work lokken :)
Reviews for "Twist of Fate"
JeremyLokken responds:
I wanted to put blood in it and make it a very violent death to make it funnier in that situation, BUT it was supposed to be pretty mild show for a family audience, because it played in front of crowds. Thanks for your review again!
I concur with my fellow reviewers; Not bad.
A few nice touches, pretty funny. Good work over all. Hope to see more.
Pretty good for 48 hours of work
I'm mad I didn't get to go down and see this Downtown. I hope you did well there. The flash was a little confusing and I'm not sure the second part was ironic. The velvet line, though it had to be in it, was weird. Anyway, congrats, Mr. Lokken. I hope I get to see your next public showing of one of your shorts.
Oh sweet irony LOL
I like your work, though Brenda Durbin is still my favourite.
This one was funny and the graphics were decent. Your sick humour is awesome and I think I have to credit you with some of the best writing I have seen so far.
Keep it up!
Nice
Great flash, I can't wait to see this on PBS, good luck with that. Great animation, style, and sound.
4/5