Still ok
Voice acting is your only falling point man, still got some good animation though. Keep up with the good work.
Reviews for "Batman : Mr. Freeze"
Pretty cool movie....
It was a good movie. I loved ur style and the graphics were pretty good. The only thing that killed me was the audio! You need to get more voice actors or try to make ur voice drastically different. Also, the voices had NO emotion and I wanted to stop watching becuase of that but the movie was good so i couldnt, I just sucked it up and tried to ignore the voices. Also, the sound effects weren't tat good. They didnt really fit in places or weren't "expressive" enough, if you know what I mean. I would love to see another come out with these improvements!!!!!!
voices
The voices really bothered me on this one, its as though the characters were rushing there lines.
Good atmosphere throughout though.
Get Voice Actors!
You have great talent as a flash artist. Unfortunately, your voice acting was pitiful. There was no expression, no variation, it seemed you didn't even attempt to make the dialogue sound good at all. Also, the sound the freeze gun made... it was nonsense. It was a regular gun... Next time, put somewhere near as much effort into the sound as you did the drawing.
The Joker one was better
Would you be so kind as to provide contact information in your account? I would like to ask you a few questions.
Sorry for being very critical but I am hoping you get better at this and the only way I know how to help you is to give you my honest thoughts.
1.) You should do a original Batman story. The recap of the origin of Freeze is a bit pointless. Especially when you made Ferris Boyle regret what he did! When did he ever say " O God What have I done?" Nope. That guy was a total sleaze. He was the one that insisted Nora be removed from her containment and he was the one who caused the accident. Watch your reference material again when you do these homages.
2) I like your Animated series aproach to the Red Hood one more. Even though you cut corners like copying the Joker's walk cycle from a Batman Cartoon maker animation. The BTAS style worked more. This looks too complex and stiffer.
3) The voice acting for Batman seemed better in the Red Hood too. Maybe because he has more lines and I can hear him more in this. You should ask some users on Newgrounds for voice help on the BBS. You can't do everyone by yourself although I often do the same with voice work. :( Getting a variety of voices is always best though.
I would consider helping you out if you want.
I aplaud your efforts regardless of my thoughts though. We simply don't have authors who make movies like these anymore. I think you've done something special. I hope you keep it up!