What you need now is good voice acting.
You're definitely a great animator, but sadly, the voice acting is KILLING your flashes seriousness, and hurting it's score too.
English not being your main language -really- shows.
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"Funding"
Not "founding" and not plural, either. Other than that pretty good. Nice style, blends together the Batman animated series and Batman Begins designs well. Could stand a little more fluidity in the movement. I'll be looking forward to your next work.
Overal acceptable.
Very good story adn art but crappy voices.
Fair.
The graphics were superb, and the fight scene you had between batman and Mr. Freeze (even though a little short) was incredible, especially considering that you didnt use string pulling models. Although I found that the voices for most of the people were very good, specifically Mr. Freeze's, I didn't like the way you conducted Batman's voice. The lines he had really captured the essence of Batman, but i didn't feel like the voice was dark enough. Despite my own preferences, this is definately a solid flash. Keep up the good work.
Everything was very good But....Voices lacked emo.
Very nicely animated, reminded me of the 1990 batman cartoons, I liked it. The voices were good, but the way the voices had no emotion just ruined it a bit. If you are going to have characters say their lines, make them say it with more emotion! It sounded like you were just reading their lines. They are called voice ACTORS for a reason and not voice readers...