Reviews for Tremen

[carmageddonstein]

Damned good, I must say.

It's very clear that you put a lot of work into this, and for that alone it deserves its place here on newgrounds. I couldn't tell you whether or not the story was very well told, because the story itself seemed rather random and... I don't know. Plenty happened, but the whole thing seemed rather uneventful.
Some sounds other than the music and the one line would have been nice.
It was good animation. You have that aspect of the piece very solid. However, there is still room for improvement, and I hope that you will make the effort to become more well-rounded, so that you can create things that aren't JUST "good". You've got loads of potential.
All in all, it's a good piece of work, and I look forward to seeing more from you in the future.

Galenlome responds:

THanks for the positive comments and for the constructive criticism, it's very much appreicated.

And...story? That's funny :P

[bobmcguire]

alright

not that good of a plot and a bit wierd, but everything was well done, so ill give it to you, specially cause you have spent so much time on it.

[n-o-mustang]

Uhhh?

Look man, you did an excellent job on the graphics, animation and sound, but i didnt get a thing about the storyline or reason for it.

[NinoGrounds]

Nice, Tremen is not very popular but...

And obvious fan of Adam Phillips, very influenced by his artwork. Though I thought your visuals were quite stunning and you obviously put a lot of hours into this, I noticed that your animation style was very "jolty" like it kinda came out in bursts. Also, many objects I felt were too static. There were many instances when he would, for example, touch a bush and it would just sit there as if it were made out of plastic. I kind of felt that the animation would have been more powerful if you didn't have any sound effects because the music itself was pretty beautiful as it was, and that one scene where he talks to the alien with the crappy mic was quite dissapointing. However, I defenitley loved the backgrounds, good work. Yup, just some things to think about, but overall I enjoyed it.

But I'll (just did) you Five so it is alright...

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Galenlome responds:

Thankyou for the extensive review, and the 5!

[abiyasa]

Great work

Wow!! and you're just 14! I can see that you put many efforts for the artwork. Although there is room for improvement, but this is still a great work!

You got a big potential! Keep on working & do your best