pretty good
its good but i didnt have an idea what was goin on
still a good flash
gj
Reviews for "Tremen"
good for a 14 year old...
Being the same age as you, i'm suprised how much you can accomplish with these flash movies. This whole thing just got more fluent and better as it went on, something I really enjoyed seeing it. With a bit more practice you could be one of the more accomplished authors on the site. Great job!
Galenlome responds:
Thanks for that :D
The reason for it getting better as it went on, (in my opinion) was because at the beginning, I pretty much sucked at animating. But since I did this over about 1 year my skills improved a lot, and I think it shows in the animation.
Thanks again.
Nice
Firstly I have to say congrats on having done this. I truly admire the work you guys put into making these flashes. I really liked the story. I little confusing but I'm sure you'll piece it all together. The animation was very fluent. The music was beautiful. i loved every second. Reminds me of the stories i would make up when i was yonger. I'm sure that your skills as a flash animator will continue to grow. Keep up the great work.
good one
now that was a very strange animation, but it was very good.... especially the drawings. they were very good. the whole concept behind this animation was pretty good too.
overall, it was really good, i liked this one, and glad to see it win the daily 4th.
Nice, Tremen is not very popular but...
And obvious fan of Adam Phillips, very influenced by his artwork. Though I thought your visuals were quite stunning and you obviously put a lot of hours into this, I noticed that your animation style was very "jolty" like it kinda came out in bursts. Also, many objects I felt were too static. There were many instances when he would, for example, touch a bush and it would just sit there as if it were made out of plastic. I kind of felt that the animation would have been more powerful if you didn't have any sound effects because the music itself was pretty beautiful as it was, and that one scene where he talks to the alien with the crappy mic was quite dissapointing. However, I defenitley loved the backgrounds, good work. Yup, just some things to think about, but overall I enjoyed it.
But I'll (just did) you Five so it is alright...
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Galenlome responds:
Thankyou for the extensive review, and the 5!