cute
a little crude with the peeing on graves. anyway like the animation style. loses a few points cause its not your own audio. try out some more stuff
Reviews for "Going Down to Newgrounds"
stoners-lunchbox responds:
Loses some points because the audio's not mine? Well, that's kinf of a crappy point to make... I DID point out that the audio belonged to Denvish and Denvish himself gave me a 9 for making a good tribute out of his song. Does he now get a crappy mark because the animation that honours his song is not his work either?
Anyway, thanks for the feedback and by the way, this is my seventh cartoon now so i'm always trying something new for my series.
pretty good!
thats was ann ok flash i really wish i could make flash but idk how to even start well it was pretty good but it was missing something maybe you need some more violence or something and i bit longer ith more words but for i liked it good job!
stoners-lunchbox responds:
Hmm... Maybe more content?
Perhaps... Next time i'll make it longer.
As for your ambition to learn flash, all it takes is a copy of Flash MX, an hour or so of spare time and decent learning capability. What really takes it out of you is coding. Otherwise it's pretty simple.
Thanks for watching!
nice job
you did a really nice job, yet i do have a small problem-- you did not folow the actual story. MC was in fact a normal kid, just really smart, and his parents were normal people. the human race in fact created the spartans from really intelligent and strong kids that they searched for around the galaxy. during the change from human to spartan, he had an inner struggle to as who he was and finnaly settled on the concept as being the savior of the human race. about 50 other kids died in the shift, as well as 6 some other spartans that survived the transition. the covenant war had been going while he was growing up, in fact, that is the reason they had become spartans. the way that you depicted reach, however, was funny, so i don't mind the shift from what really happened. the chapters lacked what really happened, but the parrody parts where good. i really liked most of it. if you want to know what really happened, read the three books.
stoners-lunchbox responds:
??? What the???
This is not a parody. It's a tribute for Denvish's song...
LOL... Besides, i have no idea of what you're on about there... I'm not good at these sorts of things...
But thanks for watching anyway ;)
You'll have to explain it further for me. Here's my addy:
white_sonic_8@hotmail.com
Sweet.
When I first saw the name, I thought it was a spoof of the South Park theme song, but I still found it amusing. Now, a South Park spoof that was NG related... i'd really love to see that.
stoners-lunchbox responds:
Your wish might just be granted... It might be quite funny actually... I have a couple of really good ideas coming to me as we speak...
Thanks for the help! This is sure to keep me busy for a while!
liked it
very cool, i liked it
stoners-lunchbox responds:
A great idea that came from a great song. No rocket science involved