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Reviews for "Lackadaisical Cohort - Part 1"

Good enough

It was okay. The techno beat is okay. The song is enjoyable enough for me.

InvisibleObserver responds:

Good enough... to make the team? To make the date? To land the job? To get married?

Make it to the moon?

THIS SONG ROCKS

yes

InvisibleObserver responds:

Neigh.

"reviews" IT MUST BE DONE

So anyway, let me first congratulate you on making the best of the week, you must be so proud. Now, don't take the following review offensive or anything; I will try my best to be as honest and politically correct as possible (lol).

K, so lets begin. First off, your melody was kind of confusing along with the wierd instruments and the repetition. Honestly, I tried listening to the entire work however, had to stop near the end, sorry. At, first I honestly thought that there was something wrong with my speakers, however, that changed as I got a little into it. The beat was all messed up though and every part of the melody was just chopping and insufficient in my opinion. The work, was very atonel meaning that it really did not have a clear and interesting melody in my opinion. I am a very traditional critic in the sense that I prefer melodies that flow and have different ideas about them and also have some unique touch to them. Sort of like Mozart or Dvorak. DAMN IT I CAN'T SPELL TODAY!!! *ahem* moving on.

Overall, I didn't really care for the song, but don't let me discourage you. Based on all the other reviews, apparently you have something, and have your own following, so keep it up. Don't let this one review discourage you, and keep an open mind when composing. Peace,
PO

InvisibleObserver responds:

In mutual fashion, don't take this as offensive or anything: I will try my best to be as honest as possible. (Not lol)

You bring up being open minded; I'm technically the one who produced something you couldn't complete listening to.

Yeahhh

Very enjoyable once again (:

InvisibleObserver responds:

Hopefully it stays that way. :)

" pichiso "

nice

InvisibleObserver responds:

IT MUST BE DONE.