Pretty good for a first time.
Pointing some things out:
Shitty dialogue, ugly text boxes.
However, the fight was pretty cool. I liked the combo counter. One thing I would have liked to see was Link using the power of the Triforce more. And I didn't really like the fact that Zero was evil in this movie.
But overall, you did a pretty good job. I gave it a 3/5. And remember: Spellcheck your dialogue. Use proper grammar. Single-color text boxes work well. I can't wait to see your future work!
thank you for your commments and about the history i had to invent a cause why link going to fight with zero . and about the spell i dont know much english
Not bad, in fact I liked it
For a first flash this was fairly good. A decent little story, good action. Good pacing. Pretty darn good.
HOWEVER...your spelling is awful! Run your script through a spell check before you finalize it. Simple as that. There are so many spelling errors in this flash that I can't even begin to name them all.
Had the spelling been better, this would have gotten a 4 or 5 from me, as it stands...3.
Just keep it in mind for next time.
That was really pretty good
Honestly, the only thing that bugged me was your english usage. Poor spelling and grammar do nothing but take away from a presentation. For a first submission, that was a cut above the rest.
Great battle, but your horrible at spelling.
The battle, was great, the flash was ok, and your spelling was off alot, improve on that a little.
And the previous reviewer, sepporoth, or whatever your name was, you claim that the maker of this movie can't spell, well you can't either, this is how you spell your character's name
S-E-P-H-I-R-O-T-H.
Other than the poor grammar, your flash was ok, I gave it a decent score, the energy beams, and attacks were cool, the graphics were a little sketchy, but not bad, improve on the graphics a little, make the backgrounds better, and you should do just fine.
Atleast you know how to make a battle with sprites properly.
All you have to do is improve on what you know, and it'll be great, keep up the good work.
VegetA.
so many things wrong with this.......
1.Zeros not an android i believe hes a cyborg
2.Zero is not evil
3.Theres no way in hell sero would lose
4.Im pretty sure plasma would melt a stupid metal sword
5.but other then that good job......