Very nice for a first
Wow that was pretty good! But the horrible quality of the Link sprite and the boring dialogue at the beginning was.. well, horrible. It got much better as it progressed (you have good drawing skills, you really don't need to always use sprites 'ya know)
anyway, many spelling errors (and remember to capitalize and not use 'u' or 'r')
thank you dude
Nice.
This was actually very good for a beginner. Its even better than my flashes, and I'm a skilled artist. Very nice. The Link sprite was a little odd around the edges, but other than that you just need to go through the .FLA file and fix all of the screwy spelling. Then, it'll be prefect. Good work. Your now #22 of 60 on my Favourites list.
nice
it was good,and had good use of sprites.But,had a bit too much spelling errors.Nice work though
Nice one
You got my 5 this is very good for a first flash keep it up
OK
It was alright but one thing i noticed is that half the words in it were spelled wrong...