Hmm...
The dialogue didn't really give the characters any personality, and there were some capitalization errors (if you intend to make this a series, it helps to make the dialogue look and/or sound nice). It wasn't too bad, but it needs more depth and plot if you want it to be popular. Just watching kids play an online game isn't that exciting.
it was good but need personalitys to the charecter
it's good in the concept but need to add personality to your charecters and depth,I liked the joke in the begining so add more plot and depth to the charecters and maybe add some voices to make it better
Not bad
Everyone discrediting this because it is similar to maple story, shut the fuck up please. Seriously, grow up you guys, some people here haven't even HEARD of maple story, I use a mac so I have never played it before, I hope you retards don't pull that shit on me. Mac users are deprived of the mainstream games. Off topic, back to the subject. The animation was par, the style was lacking, but this one professes good skill with flash. I say you just work on your illustrations and you'll be fine. Test out some other ways of animating too, sometimes certain styles work better in certain scenes. Don't rush the improvement process though, you're doing fine. Don't listen to negative comments, just listen to critique.
Nice-ish
The little green jelly thing's remind me of priston tales XD anyways i likey :D except it contains no acual story line :( but then not all online games have story lines but anyway i think the guys might have lvled a bit fast if pigg lvl was 10 when they were lvl 1 and 2 i doubt they could level so fast even with help i thought pigg was gonna kill them honestly :D
You know...
... It Looks alot Like Maplestory... Or is it me thats follin myself?