Good work.
But the green slime is on maplestory, whether you like it or not.
it was very pretty, i can see you worked hard. Keep it up.
Reviews for "Xiao Online - Episode 1 +"
dextrial responds:
I can see where you see the relationship... but that was pure coincidence. I love slimes, hence the pic on my profile. Thanks for your comment.
good
This kind of reminded me of the noob comic
Hmm...
The dialogue didn't really give the characters any personality, and there were some capitalization errors (if you intend to make this a series, it helps to make the dialogue look and/or sound nice). It wasn't too bad, but it needs more depth and plot if you want it to be popular. Just watching kids play an online game isn't that exciting.
this game was ok..
you're fighting game and shooting game are way way way better
id like if u tried expanding on those instead
this game wasnt bad
You know...
... It Looks alot Like Maplestory... Or is it me thats follin myself?