on content alone, this should be # 1!
i need to see the rest of the story. It was one of the most intriguing and suspenseful flash animations that i've ever seen. It focuses on story instead of spectacle, which, for a flash clip, is an accomplishment in itself. Keep up the good work. This has the makings of a feature portion on newgrounds.
On to part 2!!!
Damn
I wan't to see more of this!!!
Damn cool!
Now that was pretty cool. Nice story. I am looking forward to the rest of it.
subtitle
The words are kind of hard to understand. I wish it had a sub-title.
Very, Very Good
This was great. I can't say much more than that I liked it a lot. The art was good, (leagues beyond a lot of the stuff on Newgrounds), the sound matched the mood well, and the story was, just as you put it, thrilling. My only complaint is that the narrator's voice isn't as clear as I'd like. That echo effect makes it a little harder to understand every word. Great job on everything else, though. Very creative.