this flash got my super pumped
this has been the funniest flash ive ever seen, whether it was meant to be or not.
It was SO BAD. sry but the art isnt good enough to try and make it look cool or epic. plus, i don't know if it was your voice, but it seemed kinda out of place with whatever u were trying to do. maybe u should have had a friends voice it.
so ya, practice drawing some, because without the art, instead of looking dark or badass or serious in any way, it's just ridiculous. That was the main problem.
plus, he fights ppl with guns using a big hammer. wtf. it better be a magical hammer that makes him immune to bullets or have super bullet dodging speed, and it has to give him super strength, since a skinny little kid couldnt swing that bigass hammer very fast or very much at all, unless the hammer is somehow really light, but then it wouldnt have nearly as much force. seriously, a hammer. I could really imagine him jumping up saying "too late," and having all those cops just shoot him 50 times. even if they didnt do it, whatever happened next would be hilarious.
I understand this is your story, and you can make a kid with a hammer beat up as many aliens as u want, but im just saying.
but anyways, the important part is that I enjoyed it, even if it was in a different way than you might have wanted.