Gotta agree with Skullmeister...
looks like you're a good director, and you did a good job avoiding any cliche music tracks. You just desperatly need to improve the graphics and then you'll have a really great series. Look like it's got a pretty cool plot going along with it.
I like it but..
..you should look at cleaning up the art, you have a great concept on your hands but it looks sloppy the way it is. I'm not saying stop or change anything, just use a few straight lines and a little less freehand.
All in all, I'll be waiting to see the real thing. Good Luck
((( NICE TRAILER )))
~~REVIEW~~
This was a nice trailer, lots of great scenes with good content on what the full version should have or be like, awsome characters and lots of them, my only issue with this would be it may need some "SUBTITLES" just for an overall better effect for the flash...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
-Subtitles 1 Good Voices-
All though the voices/Audio were fine, it would have been nice to still have some "SUBTITLES" just for the overall effect of it making it more enjoyble...
~~OVERALL~~
A good and wellmade trailer....
~X~
Work on your graphics
Plot is going to be killer and the voice acting seems pretty good too.Your drawings are rough though and it would really detract from it.I hope you can polish that up.This is going to be an awesome series though.
cool one
very interesting trailer you got here. nice drawings, good audio from the audio portal and it looks like that it could produce a great animation when the finished flash is done. i strongly look forward to seeing it. glad to see this one win an award.