Really not as bad as you think.
Actually I thought that one part where the guy got out of the jeep was REALLY really cool.
It really was pretty ok, I gave it a three.
Reviews for "Army Thing"
Meh..
Too short for me. I liked hoe you drew the flash. But the end killed your score. I hate it when people write "I'm a noob". Just for the record, don't say that anymore.
make a longer one next time
with a plot.Your graphics and animation are pretty well done.All you need is a viable story and youll do ok.Dont be down on yourself either, that was pretty good except it was too short for the size and theres no story.
Clean Street
Why is the street so clean, and sandy stuff coming up?
Try and make the "street" dirtier, + this Flash not bad :)
((( NOTBAD )))
~~REVIEW~~
Hmmm well notbad, i kinda liked it, it had some areas that were kinda bland, but it was cool to see, and notbad work for your first, i hope you decide to make more and present us with improved artworks, nice job here, its decent...
~~THINGS TO IMPROVE ON~~
Try and lower the size of the file, its not bad but is getting up there abit...
~~OVERALL~~
Interesting flash but fun and neat, needs some detail here and there...
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