kickass
that was so kool i can't wait for the next one
kickass
that was so kool i can't wait for the next one
Best: Graphics
Graphics-7
Great drawings with multiple angles. Your drawing weakness is drawing people with their shoulder facing the screen.
Style-5
Long enough. Original enough.
Sound-4
Good music, but no voices. I know voices are hard, but try to get voices somehow. Don't use that robotic voice though. Also, I liked how even though there weren't any voices, the mouths still moved.
Violence-4
A little blood.
Interactivity-0
I don't count play buttons.
Humor-0
None.
Overall-4
Congrats on not getting blammed.
Advice-x
Keep making flash and don't quit! You have potential that can be extended much further.
Nice
You are a good artist. And nice story i liked it.
cool...
please continue this series...i like very much!!!
Drawing is not your biggest problem here.
People are probably going to bitch about the lack of voices. I say, it's better than having shitty voice actors, so I'll leave that be.
But seriously, the writing in this is dreadful, you need to develop a craft or produce somebody elses writing or something because watching this was like pulling teeth out.