Good
Good but not great, areas you could improve apon:
1. sound was a little nervewracking at times
2. get to the point, three flies was a little much
other than that great artwork and concept
Good
Good but not great, areas you could improve apon:
1. sound was a little nervewracking at times
2. get to the point, three flies was a little much
other than that great artwork and concept
Nice punchline
Really seemed to flow like a comic strip, there. Very nice work. And quite funny, too.
That was nice to look at...
if nothing else. I like the way that the fly was just a little scribble.
I especially like the stereoscopic colours, which still provided depth.
The nice, soothing, panpie music fit perfectly.
I really dug the sound effects, they weren't shrill and grainy, but soft and smooth, just up until the right moment.
Nice job!
^_<
oh... that's funny... wrong... but funny
not bad
but the end was too obvious