Charming. However, there is a computer error
Congradulations on your success on your first flash movie! However, it is not a complete success. Running this movie in Firefox on Linux, my browser crashes. It must be the movie because I saw it the first time on your website and it crashed my browser, and again at Newgrounds and it crashed my browser. This error indicates that the movie is unstable and needs a few bugs fixed.
Over all, I enjoy your comic and I did enjoy the movie.
lol
I KNEW IT!
From the beginning, I knew that would happen. Good work, i suppose, needs color and more animation, it's sorta boring, the twist brought the score from me up a bit though...
VERY Obvious
I totally saw that coming. Which is wierd, because no one really said anything about its, ummmm, obviousness (?), and usually I'm the last person to notice stuff. It was pretty well orchestrated.
a start
well it is a start, but that short did nothing for me. you knew what was going to happen. but ill give you credz for remembering the rule of 3. 3 days without water, 3 minutes without air, and only 3 repetitive things in a newgrounds flash or your wasting my time.
aint that good
the basic idea is good,its just that the story is to long for nothing,an example of what could have made it good,...first blood on the frog(more violence and evil),secound,make the gobbing quicker,third would be funny also if the frog would struggle in her mouth.the concept was good,just needs a small ''punch'' to it