i like it...
Wow. Very avant-garde and creepy! Graphics are average, but you've got an intriguing style in your compositions. The sound output was average, but the combination with the visuals was great. Not bad for a first submission. I hope to see you grow even better with this. I see good potential. Keep it going!
Not bad!
I really liked the artwork. I hope to see more coming from you soon. The dialogue was strangely slow in some places, but maybe that was an intentional mood-maker. In any case, this is some great work.
ehhh
yeah
Good but needs improvement
Well I love your sense of animation and the phrase: "psychologically deformed." Overall very interesting, and I understand about the audio, but that really took points from your work. Nonetheless I would really hope to see a continuation, especially now, five years after it was originally posted, I bet your skills have improved vastly, and hopefully now you could provide us with a greater quality work. In conclusion I would like to see more from you.
ok...
I like your style. As for the preloading button, I can deal with that if they load as quickly as that one (unless people have dial-up). There wasn't much in this. Not much explained. A perfect way to start a new flash series. I hope you improve the background sound. If this is to be a dark, violent related story, how about adding some soft, yet menacing music to add along and add on to make the humming seem more spooky.