ok...
I like your style. As for the preloading button, I can deal with that if they load as quickly as that one (unless people have dial-up). There wasn't much in this. Not much explained. A perfect way to start a new flash series. I hope you improve the background sound. If this is to be a dark, violent related story, how about adding some soft, yet menacing music to add along and add on to make the humming seem more spooky.
that...."music"
was disgusting. "mmm mmmhhmh muummmm uuuooo" something like that. terrible, bad idea >< >< ><
it was ok i guess. work on the sound
hmmm
Well it made no sense at all, the audio was poor and the animation of the characters mouth's did not match the voices, overall it was poor...
Better luck next time!
hmmmmm.
It was odd. And it kinda went no where. And it would've been of a lot more quality if you'd had a preloader (though I know you don't know how to make one). Overall it just needs a lotta work.
Medium
Well i doubt you intended it, but this turned out to be a hilarious parody of every anime film i have ever seen.
5/10