WOW
THAT WAS AMAZING
Reviews for "Big Red - Mr Jones"
BigRed responds:
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Amazing
I love the lyrics, and the background music was really nice althought it went on a bit too long at the end for me but apart from that. I really like this.
BigRed responds:
sankyoo
Pure awesomenes
This was just awesome. I dont like rap over all but this song was just beautiful. But why I'm not giving you a 10 is that the ending is just a little flat you know. But over all is awesome !!!!
BigRed responds:
The ending was flat on purpose, just to bug you! :D
I like what I'm hearing
First off, good job Big Red. I think this song could use some work but so far I really like what I see. You have the right feeling in your voice and a good pensive rhyme scheme. You could look over the words cleaning things up adding some more canny quirks.
The biggest thing to look at though is getting a chorus in with some good melodies and maybe some sick emotional singing. Because no matter how good the rap is, people's ears can get tired pretty quick so the chorus is your perfect chance to jazz it up.
Right now all you have is harmonies, rap, and a beat. There are those that can lay out some better melodies for you, but like you said you are improving.
It was nice of you to give a shout out to YunVeros and maybe you could ask to collab with him.
Like I said, I like what I'm hearing. So best of luck, and keep it up.
-EtherealMonk
7/10 for improvement
5/5 for effort
BigRed responds:
See, I didn't want to put a chorus in this one, I wanted it to be more of a poem than a cohesive song. And I would love to collab with YunVeroz one of these days, although I'm under the impression that he doesn't do it much. Some day maybe!
good not perfect
Very much words but less music
Work at this
BigRed responds:
Will do dog!