nice
your a very good lyricist, i liked that this song had a deep meaning, a lot of hip hop/rap is just talking about bullshit but not this.
good job :D
nice
your a very good lyricist, i liked that this song had a deep meaning, a lot of hip hop/rap is just talking about bullshit but not this.
good job :D
Old school hip-hop w/ Sick lyrics
I know this is hip-hop and the beat has to loop, but you gotta find a better producer. The beat brings this song down BIG TIME. Other than than I wish this song had a chorus and was longer than 3 minutes. Fix that this song would be golden!
I didn't expect to be moved on Newgrounds!
This made me stop and think after I listened to it. Very deep, very good. You're an inspiration to us all-or at least to me.
I'm glad I've made you think, I don't think there's any better reaction to get to a song!
AWSOME-TASTIC and real
I have listened to this song alot ant its still amazing. The song hase great rythem and the words just dont rhyme they tell a story. And in a way this story is kind of true, alot of us dont see whats happening outside of our homes and out of our reach.
Sank yoo sir!
This must be the greatest rap song ever created.
It has an awesome lyrics that you can learn a lot from.
The violin tapping and the orchestra makes the song a little sader.
The old-skool beat and the bass sound perfect togeather.
I hope you will become famous some time!
Wish ya the best of luck, dawg!
{MuX}
Something we all adore,
Something we're dying for,
Nothing but pain stuck in this game,
Searching for fortune and fame.