It wasn't bad, but...
why did u put in that dragon ball z-ish thing?! that was lame!
It wasn't bad, but...
why did u put in that dragon ball z-ish thing?! that was lame!
I like it
Graphics and stuff like that have never really been important to me. I enjoyed the flash, thought it was funny.
Also, to the guy before me (the one who's old and wise). You keep going on about how you're allowed to have your oppinion, which is true. However, at the same time you try and make out that your oppinion is right. Saying "i don't know how it made it to the portal" shows signs of your ignorance and lack of understanding of other peoples oppinions. Obviously, a lot of people liked the flash for various reasons. If you want people to accept your oppinion, you have to accept theirs.
same flash?
even though this is supposed to be the second half, it seems to have a totally different look and feel to it, then the first, but that aside, not bad. Parts were really good, then others weren't (i.e. the whole yellow hair thing is really overdone) and could have been left out.
its ok
not the worst thing iv sean on ng but not the best.
once again i get to tell the truth
this was'nt even a cool flash, it's story line is not even remotely interesting, and the animation is bad, granted its better than your first, but the first time you have sex, isnt like the 15th time, your bound to get better...least i hope, anyways since my reveiw for this the first time was takin off, PunkRawkNic is a chick not a guy so i doubt she has a penis to pop pimples ok? anyways. this flash needs work and you need to do more work and try harder to make it look better because it seriously just looks bad, i dont know how it got by in the portal, sorry but im being truthful of my opinion and i have blammed many entrys as well as saved the ones i thought were good, so dont think im picking on you because i know your just a kid and it makes you mad when you see things that are putting down your work, but its true, if you want a good reveiw from me, impress me, because i noticed not all your reveiws are good, so dont make me look like the bad guy for doing my job as a member on newgrounds, smooth up the characters, work on voices and all that good stuff, because i didnt see much improvement from your first flash to this one ok?
ok man, thats all i needed in your first review without the insults and shit. now that youve actually written a proper review I respect your opinion. ok. I will try to do better in the next part, which is coming along pretty good. But yeah these first two volumes Ive just been learning flash myself and its kinda just been a story ive been working on to improve my flash skills.