Reviews for Black Knights Episode 1

[Big-butt-smart]

I'd like to see more

Not bad for a start but a couple of points to improve on
1. Voice acting felt forced and not much emotion
2. Sounds were decent but could use a bit more
3. As any begining artist you still have very miniscule problems with your animation (when the king of the castle looks over, his eyes turn black then red, when riding the horse, the guy drawing his sword looks a little clunky)
4. The subtitiles were a little clunky at sometimes, but the spelling was correct, that i always enjoy
5. this is more of a question, is this a medieval story, why was the main knight using a katana rather than the traditional sword?

Other than that great work, keep it up

[S-Ops]

great start

the graphics were great its just the sounds.the voices were soft lucky enough there were subtitiles and there was no feeling in them ethier, no hatred in their voices. when reading the script get a feeling of it then use that feeling for the lines and it would be great ^_^

[Christhecritic]

mmm I'll be generous

Well first of all the graphics are decent (nothing is perfect)
secondly the sound was nice
the whole magic thing dropped you a few points....just doesnt fit
lastly (to Anger_of_Souls) look just because they werent in Japan doesnt mean that people cant experiment with sword types so don't even bother making such a remark

[jmdek]

Superb artwork, but...

For such a superb animation, I'm surprised you didn't take the time to check your spelling on the subtitles and to review your piece and notice that the voices were unintelligible for most of the movie. Too quiet, or too drowned out by the other noises/music.

Your artwork was fantastic, but on your next submission you may want to look into another voice actor so that they aren't all the same voice.. and check over your work! If you can't hear what they're saying, neither can we. And nothing makes a submission look more amateurish than spelling mistakes. Also.. in one part you had a guy say "Yes, lord?" but your subtitle was like "YES.... Lord?!?". Don't overdo it.

[JaconWes]

hmmmmmmmmmm pretty good

I have to say it was superb not one of the best but it was very well done. graphics were well off, style was good, sound couldve been better, violence well of course very good, and the dialougue was very well done.
A 4.5 out of 5